...... Meh. It's not too shabby as a story in itself, but I suggest you go look for someone to go and furnish this even further.
i don't get what you mean if you talking about drawing and all i'm trying but i doesn't seem like any could draw this for me about '' even further '' then i'm not planing to finish the story anytime soon
Uhm, I was refering to your writing skills... Afterall, this is a story thread, is it not? (Unless the title deceived me somehow)
this is indeed a story ... what's wrong with my writting skils could yu clarify a suggestion will be more than welcomed
Not that there's anything wrong (aside from misspellings), but a good scan or two across your work will surely help you spot and kill those misspellings. Imma... Meh...
funny thing is no one asked for your prensence yet you keep presenting yourself You are more than welcomed to leave as your comments add nothing to the story but making it look silly - childish - and pointless which will not be tolerated especially from a toxic person that is permently banned
my profile pic and signature and more mature than any crap you said up untill now LOL YOU dare to tell ME that the world needs less people like me ? you are pathetic mate i'm the one writting a story to improve myself and to entertain the community you are the one sharing useless crap and saying meaningless things i couldn't give less crap about worthless people like you
thank s<3 appreciate the support ^-^ --- Double Post Merged, May 19, 2017, Original Post Date: May 18, 2017 --- ->->Suggestion<-<-So i've came up with an idea guys so most likely the next chapter will hold a lot of stuff ( hopefully ) and MIGHT just might cover new characters I already have a bunch in my head but feel free to post a character that would be a good addition to the story