»~Pink Moon~ ==Page 12== :Imagination

...... Meh.

It's not too shabby as a story in itself, but I suggest you go look for someone to go and furnish this even further.

 

i don't get what you mean
if you talking about drawing and all i'm trying but i doesn't seem like any could draw this for me
about '' even further '' then i'm not planing to finish the story anytime soon

 

Uhm, I was refering to your writing skills... Afterall, this is a story thread, is it not? (Unless the title deceived me somehow)

 

this is indeed a story ...
what's wrong with my writting skils could yu clarify a suggestion will be more than welcomed

 

Not that there's anything wrong (aside from misspellings), but a good scan or two across your work will surely help you spot and kill those misspellings. Imma... Meh...

 

funny thing is no one asked for your prensence yet you keep presenting yourself
You are more than welcomed to leave as your comments add nothing to the story but making it look silly - childish - and pointless which will not be tolerated especially from a toxic person that is permently banned

 

my profile pic and signature and more mature than any crap you said up untill now LOL
YOU dare to tell ME that the world needs less people like me ? you are pathetic mate i'm the one writting a story to improve myself and to entertain the community you are the one sharing useless crap and saying meaningless things
i couldn't give less crap about worthless people like you

 

great i don't wanna see you around too

 

nice story m8 keep up the good work

 

thank s<3 appreciate the support ^-^

--- Double Post Merged, May 19, 2017, Original Post Date: May 18, 2017 ---

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So i've came up with an idea guys so most likely the next chapter will hold a lot of stuff ( hopefully ) and MIGHT just might cover new characters
I already have a bunch in my head but feel free to post a character that would be a good addition to the story

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