»Comic Twenty-Seven

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  1. Pyro Knight

    Pyro Knight Enthusiast Member

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    Greetings, wonderous people of Guildcraft! Another week means another comic! Just a quick reminder, if you’re uninterested, think this is post farming or an utter waste of time, I recommend you go elsewhere. Also I would like to take this time to mention, that so far my comic series hasn’t been getting as much attention as it used to. Maybe it’s because in my previous comics I added interesting characters like: Diyon, Shazil, Kocoski, Megan, JohnBean, but the one I got the best feedback on was probably Vurow. As a certain someone said; Vurow is a perfect fight to be seen because instead of being stronger or weaker than me, he’s a perfect one on one duel. So let’s cross our fingers and hope this special someone will bring as much praise as Vurow once did.

    Flames flicker across the hollow trees, and glides across the dark blue lake, showing off a magnificent glow. Following the sparks of ember we find a campsite, filled with the remaining soldiers whom were not slaughtered by NightTroy. Italo lays in a soft bed, next to him was a small wooden table. On top of the wooden table was a glass of water which was barely touched or drank from. Italo was in a coma-like state, after taking a massive knockout from being flung across fifty feet constantly bashing into trees. After what felt like years, Italo opens his light brown eyes and raises his head.

    Italo: Uhh... what... where... am I?

    Once Italo was fully awake, he takes a moment to observe his surroundings. Anxious yet curious, Italo pushes himself out of bed and looks for any sign of other people. A conversation could be heard nearby, Italo ducks behind a large pile of crates, eavesdropping on the soldiers. Italo tries to get in as close as possible, however the crates were as far as he could go, luckily managing to hear the conversation clearly at such a distance.

    Soldier One: When’s Troy gonna comeback?
    Soldier Two: Don’t know, probably eaten or slaughtered.
    Soldier Three: Thank god. If ya ask me, he deserved to die.
    Soldier One: What’re you talking about?
    Soldier Three: I’m sick of him bossing me around like I’m some sort of kid.
    Soldier Two: He’s our Captain, it’s his job.
    Soldier One: And he’s a damn fine one. So shut your trap or you’ll risk the same fate he did.
    Soldier Three: I don’t care! Also... has anyone checked on the ‘patient’ recently?

    By patient, the soldiers were referring to Italo. The soldiers walk over to the hut where they last saw Italo, but was interrupted by a rustling in the trees. Out of the trees was NightTroy, who was stained with blood. The soldiers stopped themselves and turned to NightTroy, bowing their heads to grace his presence. Italo looks over and finds a dagger on NightTroy’s shoulder, there were words carved on the dagger that read ‘Fuil nan undead.’ Italo uses this opportunity to flee without being noticed.

    NightTroy: I smell... something lingering. The patient... find him. He’s here somewhere.
    Soldier One: How can you tell?
    NightTroy: I have the little peasant’s scent. Now find him.
    All Soldiers: Yes sir!

    Meanwhile near the Kingdom of Chaos, Kocoski was dampening Luisa’s clothes with teardrops. Luisa has been recently beheaded by the God of Strength, Jai, who brutally punched her head right off her body. Kocoski stops sobbing for a moment to find vines wrapping around Luisa, and pulling her into the ground. Kocoski calls for me to help her out of the ground, but our strength wasn’t enough, she was pulled to the earth. Kocoski kicked the ground in rage and screamed out for Luisa, unaware of the unexpected occurrence of the weather. Kocoski and I look up and see sand flying up into the air in a circular motion, creating some sort of tornado.

    PyroKnight: Boy! It’s a sandstorm! RUN!

    Kocoski and I run as fast as we could but the sandstorm engulfed us and we were stuck with pin this vortex of dust. In the sandstorm we found another person, he was tall and thin with long black hair and sharp fingernails, with a sword piercing out of his back. UltimateMustafa the God of Speed has awakened.

    UltimateMustafa: What’s your problem, little boy? Children your age shouldn’t be out here.
    Kocoski: Shut up!
    UltimateMustafa: Tsk tsk. A little aggressive, aren’t we? Now whom might you be, sir?
    PyroKnight: A man who can snap your neck like a twig.
    UltimateMustafa: Oh, oh dear oh dear. Have I done something? All I did was ask you a question, and already you’re treating me as if I caused a plague... does that sound familiar, PyroKnight?
    PyroKnight: I did nothing of the sort.
    UltimateMustafa: Interesting. aXed told me otherwise. There’s a bounty in it for you, and who am I to turn down a prize?
    PyroKnight: Leave... before this becomes hectic.
    UltimateMustafa: Alright... suit yourself.

    As soon as I blinked, UltimateMustafa was right in my face and gave me a swift uppercut and dodged my counter. Acting cocky, he cracks his neck and shakes his hands, ready for another strike. They don’t call him the God of Speed for nothing, he zoomed from one spot to another at light speed trying to confuse me. UltimateMustafa withdraws his titanium blade and slashes me across the back, then makes a U-turn and comes back for seconds. At one point, UltimateMustafa was going so fast, he left a trail of fire that ignited his blood-stained cape. Kocoski then takes out his sword and misses, UltimateMustafa saw an advantage to use Kocoski against me. UltimateMustafa grabs a bit of dust and flings into Kocoski’s eyes which causes Kocoski temporary blindness. Kocoski was swinging his blade everywhere, UltimateMustafa runs back and forth to keep jabbing at Kocoski. However UltimateMustafa’s cheap tactic gave me an idea, so I grabbed some dust and waited for UltimateMustafa to come close. After he started to charge towards me I threw dust into his eyes, and just like I planned, he couldn’t see. This was my chance to strike him, I rushed towards him and grabbed his arm... only to realise his arm was dissolving. It turns out being the God of Speed comes at a heavy price, he runs so fast that his skin starts to disintegrate until he becomes a skeleton.

    UltimateMustafa: YOU FOOL! WHAT HAVE YOU DONE TO ME?!
    Kocoski: PyroKnight! What’s happening?!

    Recovering from his blindness, Kocoski finds UltimateMustafa’s hair and flesh disintegrated into thin air. What also disintegrated was UltimateMustafa’s humanity, he starts to go beast mode and rip out his limbs and stomach to make a ball and chain weapon. There was blood everywhere, the sand, his clothes and his skin, which was still disintegrating. What went from a deep, calm voice turns into high pitch screaming, showing what the curse of the gods do. UltimateMustafa flails his limbs wildly and smacks it everywhere, whilst darting around the sandstorm yet even faster! Until I finally catch him and tear off his head. With his final breath his voice went back to deep and calm, using up his final words.

    UltimateMustafa: Please... forgive me, Valos.

    UltimateMustafa disappears into thin air, yet his shrieking could still be heard. To remind us of our encounter. I called for Kocoski, to tell him that the sandstorm finally stopped and we’re on our way to the Kingdom of Chaos. Kocoski sheds a tear and musters up the strength to continue. Kocoski turns back and thinks to himself.

    Kocoski: Who’s... Valos?

    To be continued...
     
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  2. xReveal

    xReveal Faithful Poster Member

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    Nah, Shazil is the best character x)
     
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  3. Pyro Knight

    Pyro Knight Enthusiast Member

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    Interesting. I’ll have to remember that.
     
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  4. Xpart

    Xpart Quick Digit Member

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    How much has it been to write all of this?! this is really interesting and deserves the most appreciation!
     
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  5. Angry945

    Angry945 Nimble Knuckle Member

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    Sarcasm levels over 9000
    --- Double Post Merged, Feb 18, 2019, Original Post Date: Feb 18, 2019 ---
    Ok so here are the characters so far

    PyroKnight=Kratos
    Kocoski=Link
    Luisa=Zelda
    aXed=That midget from Skylanders
    Megan=Badass Ninja
    Jai=Hulk
    UltimateMustafa=Germaphobic
    Shazil=That big faceless monster from dark souls 2
    Vurow=The best character ever
    Dark Thought=The dragon from The Hobbit

    That's all I got from this comic so far
     
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  6. ngyuyang

    ngyuyang Nimble Knuckle Member

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    Ew
     
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  7. Xeph

    Xeph Big Mood Member

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    “starts to go beast mode”

    I haven’t heard that phrase since 2014 oh my gosh thanks for the throw back
     
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  8. UltimateMustafa

    UltimateMustafa Quick Digit Member

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    ........
     
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  9. Angry945

    Angry945 Nimble Knuckle Member

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    Yea I feel bad for u too :—:
     
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  10. Jeremy026

    Jeremy026 Journeyman Member

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    i thought they where just made up characters until i saw Axed in it and now UltimateMustafa Commenting here..;D
     
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