»Comic Fourteen

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How long did you think it took to make this comic?

  1. 1 Hour.

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  2. 2 Hours.

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  3. Longer than 2 Hours.

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  1. Pyro Knight

    Pyro Knight Enthusiast Member

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    Greetings once more guildcraftians. I understand I was supposed to upload a comic yesterday, but I got held up by a few things such as; Family issues, Boxing class and so on. However I am back today, and before we begin... to those who say this is a waste of time, then I suggest you leave this thread right now. I understand if you dislike this comic, but really you’re wasting your own time by reading this. So if you don’t want anything to do with this comic. Leave the thread, it’s for your own good. Anyways I asked Vurow if he wanted to be in this and he gave me full permission. So enjoy.

    I was only inches away from the center of the volcano. The bleeding giant reached out trying to stop me, he couldn’t make it in time. My fist makes a loud crunching sound as contact was met between the ground and my fist. The floor began to quake and the rocks were trembling, lava was rising beginning to erupt violently.

    Hon: You fool! You’ll doom us all!!

    The giant’s last words were ringing in my ears, it was the only thing I could think of in that moment. I have doomed everyone. Kocoski and his friends are inside the volcano and will be drowned in the mass amount of lava, I’ve slaughtered half the population of the world. But.. vengeance... will be mine. aXed will pay for what he has done to me. The Giant’s echoing cry, screamed across the land as he goes up in flames. Incinerated every last speck of dust in his body, now nothing. What remained left of the Giant was a large glowing stone, it felt squishy and red droplets dripped from a hole inside. It was the heart, it was large enough to fit in the palm of my hand. Quite small for a giant. After the eruption of lava has finally come to end, the air felt hot but the sky was clear. I almost forgot about Kocoski and his friends, they are still inside of the cave. I rush to find them, they could be dead, they could be alive who knows.

    PyroKnight: Boy! Where are you?! Boy!
    Kocoski: PyroKnight? Is that you?!
    PyroKnight: Boy!!

    It was relief I found Kocoski, his friends were still alive as well. Turns out not EVERYONE near me dies. I sprint to help them, they were trapped behind molten lava. One touch and you’ll never hear the end of it. I had to save them. The volcano was collapsing I had no time. I leaped towards them grabbing each of them and breaking through the volcano thus saving them. No one was injured except for Italo.

    Italo: Could you make our landing... a little... softer next time? Just asking.
    PyroKnight: Boy.. tell your friend he needs to suck it up.
    Italo: Hey! I could take you down in a fight any day! Come on!

    He got what he asked, I gave him a swift punch in the jaw and flung him into the trees. He went flying. Nearby was a camp, a camp of soldiers, lead by NightTroy. The shattering of the trees woke them right up.

    NightTroy: Urgh?? What was that!?!

    NightTroy looked at the broken trees and saw the trail leading to one sore Italo, who had almost every bone in his body broken, he glared at the fallen soilder, then turned back to see a trail of lava leading to whence he came from.

    NightTroy: Men. Follow the trail of lava. Four of you stay behind and care for this... excuse.

    NightTroy mounts his horse, the men repeat his actions. He grabbed the rope around the horse’s mouth a yelled ‘Yah!’ The horse neighed in agony and followed his orders. The other men and horses followed from behind while four other soldiers have been left to care for Italo. The loud galloping footsteps roared throughout the forest, cracking sticks, clattering swords, cries of war. They were bloodthirsty, the many that were heard are hard to tell how many there are, but we knew there would be hundreds.

    PyroKnight: Boy! Run!
    Kocoski: Where?! There’s no where to hide!
    PyroKnight: I don’t care!

    I rushed to find the nearest cave, Kocoski followed behind thinking I was crazy. Kocoski convinced Luisa to come with us.

    Kocoski: Come on! Luisa let’s go!
    Luisa: What if we die? Why do you trust him?!
    Kocoski: He hasn’t been wrong yet.

    Luisa stares into the distance and turns back to see that the army is nearly here. Luisa turned to Kocoski all the thoughts were spinning in her head. She didn’t know what to do. She finally decided to go with Kocoski.

    Luisa: If you get me killed...
    Kocoski: I know, you’ll bring me down with you. Come on let’s go.

    The duo have been running for miles, they stopped for a moment to catch their breath. They knew it was only a matter of time before the army would catch up to them. They were in deep peril. Luckily they found a cave. They ran inside without hesitation, no looking back, only forward. They breathing heavily, Luisa was coughing blood, red drops from her mouth and blue tears rolling down her eyes.

    Luisa:Koco-Koco-Kocoski... they’re after us. They want us dead.
    Kocoski: No. They don’t they want PyroKnight dead. It’s all my fault. I should’ve never have found PyroKnight, we wouldn’t be in this mess.
    ???: Very kind words boy. But the blame is mine.

    Out of the shadows was a large familiar figure. It was PyroKnight. They were relieved and terrified. They’re in a cave, I was their only light source. I looked down to them. They were tired, bloody and frightened.

    PyroKnight: Boy... get up. Bring your friend as well. We’re leaving.
    Kocoski: Now... now? We just got here.
    PyroKnight: We die in here, or we die out there? Which one?
    Kocoski: What could be in this cave, that could possibly harm us, in anyway possible?

    From within the centre of the cave, yelled a loud shrieking noise. It sounded like a child. There was another scream, it was more high pitched. It sounded like a woman. Whimpering was heard it sounded deep. It was a family. They were being attacked by something? But what? A giant? NightTroy? Who was it? So Kocoski and I investigated. At the end of the tunnel we took a peak through a tiny hole behind a large rock. There were three people and one tall armoured man. He was thin, his hair was long like a snake, his face was foggy.

    Man: Please... I didn’t mean to steal... it’s my fault take me! But spare... my family. If you have any mercy.

    The tall man leaned over to the father of one. He’s eyes were blood red. The tall man saw anger, fear. The tall man walked over to the woman and child, he stared at each of them. He reached for his sword, sliding out of his scabbard, clenching the handle, the shiniest iron seen in all the land. He pulled the sword back aiming it at the child.

    Man: No! Please! Anything but that! It’s me you want! Leave them out of it!

    The tall armoured man ignored him and stabbed both the child and woman in one blow. The woman collapsed on the floor with the child still in her arms... her dead child.

    Man: No! This has gone on far enough! Vurow!

    The tall man stared back at the the once father of one, on the floor in tears. Dragging his legs towards the man, Vurow, The Hand of Judgement, grabbed the man by the head, he lifted him up, and pointed the sword into his neck. Giving the man deep eye contact.

    Vurow: Your sins... are paid.

    Without a moment to react, Vurow driver the sword straight into the man’s throat, slicing his head off. Kocoski stares back knowing he can’t do anything. Otherwise he’d suffer the same fate. But someone had to stick up for the slaughtered family. I rose up, Kocoski was telling me to stay put. I of course ignored him, I put my beliefs in front of my safety.

    PyroKnight: Hand of Judgement!

    Vurow stopped and turned to face me, I couldn’t tell how he was feeling, this black mist was covering his entire face. All I see on him is his bloodthirsty eyes. He had his sword in hand knowing there was going to be a fight. I knew there was going to be one as well.

    PyroKnight: You know... this is wrong. The man was guilty but his family was innocent. You took the lives of those who did nothing wrong. You disappoint me. I’m taking your title... in the name of the king.

    Vurow: You.... talk too much.

    Vurow charged straight at me waving his sword, ready to strike. I blocked it with my own sword. It was going to be a duel. It’s refreshing to go toe-to-toe against someone of my equal strength, but he had his own tricks as well. We trading blow after blow, the skies were filled with sparks as our swords clashed across the battlefield, he was fast and could teleport. His swordsmanship is actually very good. I was almost bested by the Hand of Judgement. But I can’t let it happen. I needed to get that sword off him. He was very agile for someone who’s over 5000 years old.

    PyroKnight: This fog. It blinds my vision of your face. What is the cause of this?

    Vurow took the opportunity while I was unbalanced and swept me of my feet, making me land in a pool of blood. He strikes me, I dodge his blade and I counter him, knocking him flat on the floor. He fought and he fought and he never gave up. Neither did I. Kocoski was watching the us both fight. It was an intense moment.

    Kocoski: How are they still going? Time to cut this battle short.

    Kocoski finds a pebble on the floor and reaches for it. He aims the rock at flings it straight into Vurow’s eye. I took this opportunity to take his sword and stab him to the ground. With his sword pierced into his stomach attached to floor, the fog covering his face was no more. We saw a bright face with grass green eyes and his hair was a light grey.

    Vurow: Freedom... at last... The Corrupted One controls me no longer...

    Before he could finish his sentence, I stabbed him in the head with my own sword. Until he died completely.

    Kocoski: Why did you do that?! He was free and you killed him!
    PyroKnight: Enough Boy! Tell your friend it’s ok to follow us again.
    Kocoski: Unbelievable...

    Kocoski went to go get Luisa, I stayed behind with Vurow who is now impaled and dead. Two swords sticking out of him. I pulled my sword out of his head. His green eyes, his face, was now covered in one large cut, coughing up blood.

    To be continued...
     
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  2. Xeph

    Xeph Big Mood Member

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    My man Vurow finally got a part in this book, took long enough. Kappa
     
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  3. Angry945

    Angry945 Nimble Knuckle Member

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    People are probably call me dumb for this, but Vurow is the greatest thing to happen to this comic imo. Most people that PyroKnight fights in this comic is either more powerful or less powerful than him and yet he wins either way. Vurow is actually a reall fair fight, they’re both swordsman they both have good reflexes, they only thing that held this fight back from perfection is where Koco threw a rock in Vurow’s eye. It was very unfair, to a 5000 year old man. #RespectYoutElders
     
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  4. Bonsuno

    Bonsuno Faithful Poster Member

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    @Vurow
     
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  5. Vurow

    Vurow Broken Staff Member Admin

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    im confused
    --- Double Post Merged, Nov 20, 2018, Original Post Date: Nov 20, 2018 ---
    I would say

    YOU TALK WAAAAY TOOOOO MUUUUCH

    good story though, I like it :)
     
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  6. JohnBean2014

    JohnBean2014 Forum Veteran Member

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    You dissapointed your collosal fanbase by posting this late:mad:
     
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  7. Angry945

    Angry945 Nimble Knuckle Member

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    What fanbase lol
     
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  8. Pyro Knight

    Pyro Knight Enthusiast Member

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    Indeed. Vurow is the ‘Hand of Judgement’. Whom is selected by the four kings to punish sinners. Vurow was the most trusted and honest knight in the realm. People honoured him like a god. One day, he was given the ‘Sword of Justice’, by the King of Order. Later in time a dark force Corrupted the worthy knight so he locked himself in a cave where no one can get in or out.
     
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  9. EnchanterPvP

    EnchanterPvP Honorary Poster Member

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    wow vurow is in this comic, whos next gamerclol?
     
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  10. ngyuyang

    ngyuyang Nimble Knuckle Member

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    It could be you :thinking:
     
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  11. JohnBean2014

    JohnBean2014 Forum Veteran Member

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    You w0t
     
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  12. Pyro Knight

    Pyro Knight Enthusiast Member

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    Actually I don’t know whether to add JohnBean2014 or just do another comic on Xephanez.
     
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  13. xReveal

    xReveal Faithful Poster Member

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    Add me back <3
     
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  14. Xeph

    Xeph Big Mood Member

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    XEPHANEZ PLEASE

    <3
     
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  15. TigerStrike

    TigerStrike Ancient Poster Member

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    I want this to be a part of my exams
     
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  16. RenanBr1214

    RenanBr1214 Quick Digit Member

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    Could you make an anime comic?<3
     
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  17. Nick sharma

    Nick sharma Journeyman Member

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  18. EnchanterPvP

    EnchanterPvP Honorary Poster Member

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    add me in with vurow man he handsom
     
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  19. JohnBean2014

    JohnBean2014 Forum Veteran Member

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    Hey hey hey I was just about to get famous
     
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  20. EnchanterPvP

    EnchanterPvP Honorary Poster Member

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    too bad beaner :^)
     
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