»Comic Seven

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  1. Pyro Knight

    Pyro Knight Enthusiast Member

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    Hello once again ladies and gentlemen. Today I have a new comic, this time I tried to make the story as clear as I can, so let's see what happens now.

    The winds blows through the grass, as our feets sweep across it. Kocoski was walking right next to me, but a little closer yet still keeping his distance, he's starting to trust me a bit more, I never admit it to him but I felt slight joy.

    Kocoski: Are you sure we can trust him? He seemed kind of angry.
    PyroKnight: He lost someone close to him, even I feel some empathy for him.
    Kocoski: Do you ever feel... guilty of what you do to people?
    PyroKnight: There are two kinds of people in this world: People that are in my way, and people who deserve it, I show no mercy, they must pay the price for their lack of respect.
    Kocoski: Oh... ok.

    There was a long silence. Until Kocoski broke it.

    Kocoski: Hey, uh can I ask you something...
    PyroKnight: Is it about how I killed Xephanez?
    Kocoski: Yeeeesss.

    Kocoski wasn't positive of his choice of words. So he did a slight grin hoping I don't stab him in the neck or the back or worse, the eyes. He decided to ask me in a different way.

    Kocoski: How are you so strong?
    PyroKnight: Pardon?
    Kocoski: You lifted up a entire tree as if it were nothing. Are you a god?
    PyroKnight: … No. I'm not a god. I'm a...
    Kocoski: LOOK! There's the head!

    Kocoski acts as excited as a child on Christmas morning. He rushes towards it as if he were a bull seeing red.
    As Kocoski was about to reach it, he heard a voice, the voice sounded familiar and deep, he ran to hide as if he cannot be seen with me.

    PyroKnight: Boy?! Where are you going?
    Kocoski: Run!

    I turn around and I find an army of soldiers all equipped with enchanted iron swords and enchanted bows. The leader however caught my attention, he was wearing a dark brown suit along with a silver shoulder strap and was holding a shiny green potion.

    CaptainOgy: Long way from home are you?
    PyroKnight: You have no idea...
    CaptainOgy: Then why? Why come all the way out here. I've never seen you go outside your comfort zone before. How does it feel to be on OUR territory?
    PyroKnight: Feels the same.
    CaptainOgy: Well now... using your smart mouth against me, hmm? Not a wise decision, but... it's your choice. Ask the last few people that did.

    CaptainOgy gives me a smirk, I of course wouldn't allow him to get away with it.

    PyroKnight: I just want the head. Now leave me be.
    CaptainOgy: Oh, no no no no no no no no… No! That's not how it works.
    PyroKnight: Maybe your brain doesn't work... Leave... me... alone.

    CaptainOgy could tell I was getting more frustrated by the second, but he didn't care, he just sees me as a trophy.

    CaptainOgy: Men! Ready?

    The soldiers ready their bows, holding the strings back. I just stood there, still, as a rock. They soldiers were surprised of how calm I was, it was almost fifty on one.

    CaptainOgy: Aim!

    I was watching as the soldiers were shaking, scared about what I'm going to do next. Kocoski was noticing how I was glowing brighter.

    CaptainOgy: FIIR...…


    Before he could finish that sentence, I unleashed a very large ball of fire and incinerated the troops. I could see their ashes scatter across the floor. CaptainOgy however survived, Kocoski was in shock at what he just saw.

    CaptainOgy: It's gonna take more than that to kill me!

    He lunged towards me and strikes the first blow, knocks me down, I feel aching in my head. I turn to face him, I quickly get up before he could attack me again.

    PyroKnight: Why do you seek to hunt me down?
    CaptainOgy: aXed's orders: "Hunt down the PyroKnight".
    PyroKnight: Leave... and take your threats with you.
    CaptainOgy: For the last bloody time... NO!

    He makes his move, I summon my sword once more and block him. It was a duel, one on one. He looked nervous and ready as if he were preparing this ever since his existence.

    CaptainOgy: I've seem to have underestimated you... but it's going to take more than blocking to defeat me.

    The fight dragged on for quite some time, it was swords slashing themselves against each other, rocks breaking apart, my armour scrapping across CaptainOgy's blade. Just as I was about to strike him, he just let loose.

    CaptainOgy: WHY... WON'T... YOU... DIE?!

    As he was blinded by rage, I slammed him down so his forehead touches the floor, I reach for his head, I smash the top of it like it was a bongo drum, it was cracking as if someone threw a rock at a window. As soon as I dealt the last blow, I just saw this big pink blob which appeared to be his brain, without second thought , I jabbed it rapidly with my sword. After which he was still alive.

    CaptainOgy: Don't you know when to give up?!
    PyroKnight: Rrrgh!

    With that grunt I charge at him, only finding myself surrounded by an army of the undead.

    CaptainOgy: Who needs those soldiers when I have the undead.

    All at once they leapt onto me grabbing me, doing their best to pull me apart. But that's just it... I've had enough of this nonsense, CaptainOgy not dying, the undead. I just get worked up just thinking about it. So I glow brighter than I usually do. Then BOOM! My armour disappers and all I became was a ball of fire, shaping into a human-like creature.

    PyroKnight: ARAGH!!!!!!!!!
    CaptainOgy: What the...


    I crush his army of the undead one by one, until CaptainOgy was the only one left. He was starting to get worried, he was covered in dark red blood, he couldn't take much more. With no warning I cuff him straight in the jaw. He released an angry and painful scream, filling the air of his tragedy. His jaw was sizzling, he was almost on fire.

    CaptainOgy: NO! STAY BACK!


    I strike him right in the back. I grab him by the head, putting my raging hands across his face, till it turns to charcoal.

    CaptainOgy: AAAAARRRRRRRRGH!!! You... you don't know when to stop!

    At his weakest I pin him down, I thump his face with my foot, then again, and again. He was begging for mercy, he wanted this to stop. I of course refuse, with one last stomp I crush his skull and his brain. Blood and cracked skull pieces were everywhere, his brain was sitting right there, flat as a pancake. I regained my armour back, I almost forgot about Kocoski.

    PyroKnight: Boy? Where are you?
    Kocoski: Here... with the head.
    PyroKnight: You were not supposed to see that.
    Kocoski: See what?
    PyroKnight: Let's just go.

    So we went back to the cottage where Diyon waited for us to return his daughter's head. To be continued...
     
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  2. ngyuyang

    ngyuyang Nimble Knuckle Member

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    Pyroknight's thought process:
    Hmm I want CaptainOgy have his undead surround me to show some semblance of a struggle but I need to have a way to win because well i'm the main character!

    I know!

    Lets have me turn on killaura. Wait no.... too dumb and uncool but what about.. FLAMEAURA

    PERFECT

    This has been a joke, please don't take it seriously and I apologize if I somehow offend you. Your "comic" (let's call it a story, comics have pictures) has been great and has decent word choice. I have no qualms against you continuing and I hope the comments aren't that harsh this time.
     
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  3. Pyro Knight

    Pyro Knight Enthusiast Member

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    That's actually quite accurate. Except I never thought of kill aura. I think of it more as revealing myself.
     
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    UltimateMustafa Quick Digit Member

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    HonLour Honorary Poster Member

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    pyroknightcomics.publishing.inc
     
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  6. Angry945

    Angry945 Nimble Knuckle Member

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    I have been waiting for this.
     
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  7. xAdityaStrafes

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