»I made this intro check it out!

My new intro fully made by me [My first intro] tell me how much out of 10?
www.youtube.com/watch?v=Ev5NovnfpaI
v2

 

How did u get the video to not come in the online viewing form ? Is it just me (I'm on my phone) or is it for everyone?

 

3/10

 

Not that bad 8/10

 

Yea the video doesn't show for some reason

 

Pretty cool but the writing on it is just not natural. Make it a bit more faded and try another font. What is that? Times New Roman ? Try something a bit inclined and thinner. I give it 7.5/10 I honestly liked more the intro from the MW3 video

 

no effects -1
bad font -1
bad song -1
repeating same thing -1
so 6/10

 

v2 may be even worse lll
EDIT: a new v2

 

I really want to know how that works tbh

 

not that much this time
0.5/10

 

7/10

 

Not bad, I give it 5/10

 

What about the merch?