Ok guys so i have a couple songs out at the moment, i know this isn't minecraft related and i hope its allowed but yeah please give my music a listen and leave feedback if you like it or not! thanks Dai - Alone My Soundcloud if you are interested in listening to my other 3 songs! please check it out https://soundcloud.com/user-743808406
You shouldve put Aquaman instead of 'Alone'. But that aside, i could totally see some mc "Gang" videos with that music on it xd (no offense bro, you did good for your first songs)
(Person who knows a lot about rap music here) Alright I'm not here to criticize but I'm here to help The beat you have is nice, I can hear the trapiness of it which does in-fact give it's appeal to the overall mood. However, your rapping is the only problem. Try not to add too much effects to your voice. Having a stronger and clear voice pertains more to the audience's ears. If they can hear and understand your rap it's better than making it sound different. Also make sure that the beat's volume level doesn't over take the volume level of your vocal rap part. For the rapping part to me it kind of sounds too mellow. Try to turn up your tone of rap into a more upbeat voice. And if you can don't add too much of the "yeah yeah yeah yeah" into it. Maybe in some areas but try to branch out into the different types of call outs like "skrt skrt" and the other types. Overall its all better than what I can even do haha Great job and I wish the best of luck to you in the future.
h ahaha lol eww, and kk --- Double Post Merged, May 26, 2017, Original Post Date: May 26, 2017 --- thanks so much man this was very helpful and informative, for the part about the mellow voice i KINDA do that on purpose because it appeals to my personal preferences, and also the lyrics of the song are slightly mellow and dark you could say. Anyway thanks again man, it means alot that you took ur time to wright this helpful paragraph about my music rather than saying "its good, but i could be better" or somethin like that. --- Double Post Merged, May 26, 2017 --- Same, ground breaking discoveries --- Double Post Merged, May 26, 2017 --- also one last thing, listen to this song and tell me if i fixed the voice problem. Or tell me which song u like better, thanks https://soundcloud.com/user-743808406 https://soundcloud.com/user-743808406
Congratz you made me want to kill my self And the emo part in your name sure does describe you --- Double Post Merged, May 26, 2017, Original Post Date: May 26, 2017 --- Not trying to hate just putting out the truth other than lying to you <3
also no hate but if somehow my music made you want to kill yourself then you have a weak mind and heart. But i assume thats not true and that was just a terrible try of making a joke. also im not emo anymore i made this name in 2015, and lastly its alright that you feel that way about my music. Thanks for the feedback
I guess i do have a ''weak mind or heart'' i had to tell you the truth other like other people saying its good and probably lying
