»~~Pink Moon~~ =Page 6: It's dangereous Pt.2=

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  1. 2920131

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    ===Previously on Pink Moon===
    Good morning sweetie
    not matter what it is i know you'll get trought it.
    to be honest i want her to suffer more
    .... Mom i have something important to tell you....

    ~~~~Pink Moon~~~~
    ==Page 6: It's dangereous Pt.2==
    Mollie: Mom... i have something important to tell you
    before you anything i know you propably figured out everything that happend but let me finish what's not clear
    So i broke up with Jay .... actually he broke up with me he spent 2 months making fun of me untill he decided to reveal the truth about himself and his stupid bet. from then i was just broken i couldn't speak because i felt just so sad.... today i was minding my own business untill this girl Mia pushed me and made me fall ... everyone started laughing at me and i just couldn't take it anymore i was about to cry but then something really weird happend ... i started seeing everything red and i felt a very weird power inside of me a second later i used this unknown power against this girl ... problem is not once and not twice i hit her on the wall many times she just keep teasing me over and OVER AGAIN i couldn't take it anymore.
    but then this strange feeling happend i felt my soul breaking apart i just couldn't take it for one second then my vision switched back to normal but when i looked around me everyone was sooo afraid of even looking at me ...
    Alexandra: ... *sigh* Listen Mollie ... this power you have ... it's not good.
    Mollie: what do you mean didn't you say it was a very nice thing to have?
    Alexandra: The mind reading power ofcaurse but this ... Forcefeild is not good ... not good at all
    i know why you felt such a massive pain after using it and i know why your vision became red.
    When your anger takes over you and you have literally no option but to release it this ''power'' shows up it's some kind of advanced mind powers that allow you to controll other stuff just by using yourmind
    Mollie: well that's great isn't it ?
    Alexandra: this is where the bad part comes it .... using this power EACH use weakens your soul untill it drains you out of life ...
    Mollie looked really scared and surprised as she had literally no word to say
    Alexandra: I told you this power is NOT good at all and i DID NOT want you to even discover it.
    Mollie: Oh my god this is horrible!!!
    Alexandra: PLEASE promiss me you won't use your power anymore UNLESS it's a life or death reason PLEASE!

    Mollie: i promiss you ...
    Alexandra: Thank you Mollie for undrestanding .. also there is another thing:
    this power can be used as a defence sheild against attacks against you.. thing is it's not a full defence yes sure the attack won't even touch you but you'll take 25% of the damage that should've been dealt to you.
    Mollie: So this is like a last sacrifice power ?
    Alexandra: Kinda as it doesnt drain you fully on one use... you'll need to use it MANY times to be scared so don't worry but do as you promissed me alright ?
    Mollie: Okey
    Mollie barely could sleep that night knowing there is many secrets hiden inside of her that she has yet to discover but it seems like only time can tell when and how.
    On the next morning Mollie was bright again she woke up as always smiling and always seeing the positive side of things ... it seems that this power wasn't fully a curse.
    But things weren't looking so rainbow for her at school.
    Mollie: sorry am late.
    Class: YOU FREAK! get out of here!!
    Mollie was really scared she didn't know what to do.
    Mrs.Sally: HEY!!! everysingle one of you closes his/her mouth NOW!!!
    Class:...
    Mrs.Sally: i'm very sorry young lady what was your name again Mollie yea i Don't know what is happening between you and your class but if anything bothers you tell me okey?
    Well since you are late i'll introduce myself.
    I am your art teacher Mrs.Sally . Nice to meet you ( says it with a smile )
    Mollie:... t.. Thank you Mrs.
    Mollie took her seat but she was yet to forget what students think of her now.

    ===== TO BE CONTINUED =====
    ~~PAGE 6: END~~
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    Last edited: May 31, 2017
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  2. ScarYHD

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    read both of them awesome how its going to be
    KEP IT EP
     
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  3. TheFapKing

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    Noooo this Sci Fi shit is ****... the fact that the power drains her life is **** as ****. I want her too abooose the power, Not fucking stop using it. Bad Chapter.
     
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  4. Synergy

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    Kek not bad
     
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  5. 2920131

    2920131 Forum Master Member

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    Yay glad you like it
    Could you Act serious for once i read all your comments and no this is not close to a stupid hentai story and yes am serious about this
    Hahaha knew that you will like it
     
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  7. 2920131

    2920131 Forum Master Member

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    you didnt like it did you ;-;
     
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  9. TheFapKing

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    We have a creative writing assignment and the rough draft is due in 2 days so I'm using this. Thank you.
     
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  10. pebro13

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    Yes I did o_O
     
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  11. 2920131

    2920131 Forum Master Member

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    WHAT ! i dont undrestand !
    ow ok
    just noticed you .. nvm thanks :)
    Thanks ^-^
     
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  12. MasterTeo

    MasterTeo Nimble Knuckle Member

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    10/10 even thought I didn't read it :)
     
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  14. TheMinecraftProLord

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    Dammit
    So by each use Mollie is placing her life on the line :eek:
     
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  15. 2920131

    2920131 Forum Master Member

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    yes indeed and everytime she survives the next use is more risky
     
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  16. TheFapKing

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    I have a writing project due and i'm using this.. thank you very much.
     
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  17. 2920131

    2920131 Forum Master Member

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    ow really ? well that's actually nice ! :)
    make sure you don't give directly the 6th chapter without the other five XD good luck and thank you too ;)
     
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  18. McmmoGamer

    McmmoGamer Journeyman Member

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    LMFAO thats a super long story lol u could go longer doh GO TO 1000 VIEWS
     
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  19. Wizare

    Wizare Ancient Poster Member

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    The best story ever, really <3
     
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  20. 2920131

    2920131 Forum Master Member

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    idk if this is a troll but if you are serious then thank you :)
    nooo i barely get the views goal LOL
    also it has to be long else it'll be boring and lame
     
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