Well superpowers is very cliche and generic, but if executed perfectly, it can be good i expected a different type of progression, but it's ok
Too long to read it. Btw i respect the time and effort you put to write the Chapter 2 of the series keep going.
damn i read it its sick cant wait for the other chapter make her go on an adventure or something xd make the 2 bad girls have other superpowers like they achieved their super powers with radioactive stuff xd do what u want just keep it up
you know i want to give you a huge shoutout because THIS is what i wanted to come out of this story people that are excited people that suggest stuff and make theories thank you very very much <3 you better be kidding
it's really fun to imagin a cool story and share it with you guys so i like it and what makes me feel really great is when people like it react with it <3 --- Double Post Merged, Mar 11, 2017, Original Post Date: Mar 11, 2017 --- prob is i want to upload chapter 3 like right now from how excited i am but ........... gotta do what you gotta do ;-;
is the title pink moon cuz this is like sailor moon but different --- Double Post Merged, Mar 12, 2017, Original Post Date: Mar 12, 2017 --- I mean like the story is good but u could have a better name
you see now you've showed a good point here it reallly seems like i've got the idea from it but when i was making this story i was thinking about literally everything but sillor moon and the pnik moon title will be known in future events your theory was pretty good but still i didnt take anything from sillor moon ( idk i never watched it XD ) THANKS am glad you like the story --- Double Post Merged, Mar 12, 2017 --- OMG guys 111 views in one day am very happy thank you allot ! ik only 5 read it all :'( </3 --- Double Post Merged, Mar 16, 2017 --- am pretty sad after i noticed this chapter didnt get as much love as the first one which really concerns me ..... hope you like the third chapter xD really ;,-,;
YOU KNOW create a private conversation with me in forums i need someone to fix the gramar problems or people will not like this thanks for liking it tho <3
THE BIG WRITTING SHOULD BE THE ENCOURAGING ONE NOT THE SMALL ONE what if i had bad eyesights ... .._. thanks anyway <3 chapter 3 close <3 --- Double Post Merged, Mar 17, 2017, Original Post Date: Mar 16, 2017 --- OMG am so excited ! chapter 3 coming tomorrow !!!