»~Pink Moon~ ==Page 2== : An unexpected event

~~~~Pink Moon~~~~​

==Chapter 2: The start==​

===Page 2: An unexpected event===​

It was a warm day when Mollie was prepairing for her second day at her new school but she couldn't resist thinking of what had happend yesterday.
Mollie : Alright i got an idea I'll not answear any question and focus on the teacher while speaking and watch how the students will react I'm sure i will get some notes and maybe a few answers.
After mollie reached the class she took her seat and kept waiting untill the start of the day.
Jessica : *Sigh* here comes that stupid girl with her weird personallity
Mia : So this is the freak you told me about huh ? well this is gonna be fun!
Jessica : She is so disturbing, she literally interrupted the teacher while he was speaking and got an extra point in her exam!
Mollie : Alright I think the teacher is coming I'm gonna attempt to focus on what he/she says.
Math Teach: Welcome class,
My name is Mrs Anna and i will be your math teacher for this year, I hope we can have a great year together alright?
Class : Yes Mrs Anna, Nice to meet you
Mrs Anna : Thank you so much for the warm welcoming I'm glad to meet you too!
Alright let's start by knowing your names shall we:
You there what's your name ?
Mollie : My name is Mollie.
Mrs Anna : what a sweet name, actually how about a better way, everyone write your names in a paper and send it to me from front to back so I can know everyone's name correctly.
Now while you are at it let's start by some simple equations.
Mollie : now's your chance focus on her words.
Mrs Anna : who can tell me
Mollie : * THERE i heard all the question : who can tell me how to find X for this equation*
I knew it something's weird she still haven't finished questioning and even students didnt react yet.
what is this ?
Later in the break time...
Mollie was really Curious about what was happening but little that she knew Mia and Jessia were aproaching her not in good means.
Mia : Hey MMMM.... whatever
Mollie *here comes trouble*sigh* *
It's Mollie ....
Mia : Whatever I heard you were really smart at Science huh ? Why were you very inactive at math today.
Do you hate that subject?
Mollie : it's none of your business.
Mia : Wow it's been long since someone answered me like that, you must be very brave.... or maybe really stupid ?
Mollie : And who must you be to act all high? You are still a student like anyone here.
Mia : LISTEN I could destroy you if I wanted to, YOU ARE NOTHING compared to me you hear me?!
Jessica : Mia let's move on people are starting to look at us.
Mia : well then I will see you later jerk!
*Mollie started thinking : just as I expected I'm not going to have a great time like this... *
After a long day Mollie was heading home again with many questions roaming around her head
Mollie : I'm home!
Alexandra : Welcome back sweet heart!
Mollie : Thanks Mom.
Alexandra : So how was your day?
Mollie : Not the best really, I'm not the most loved girl you know ?
Alexandra : Aww don't be sad, am sure you'll get some friends sooner or later, remember you are a new student there, a stranger so I dont expect them to like you that fast.
*Mollie was thinking : I dont expect them to like me at all! *
hmmm, mom? Can I ask you something ?
Alexandra : Anything!
Mollie : I was Curious of something weird that happend, I tried to not answear the teacher but to focus on her questions and I noticed, I can tell what she is about to say before she even says it by anychance you got any answers? i know you'll be surprised and propably not even know what am talking about Bu-...
Alexandra : Can you tell me again how did you notice this ?
Mollie : In the first day Mr.Kai was about to ask us a question but I directly knew what he was about to say and so I answered him before he even finished his question it was very weird even the class noticed it.
Alexandra : well sooo look I dont really know if you are ready for this...
Mollie : huh ? just tell me it's been bothering me for soo two days now I cant stop thinking about it!
Alexandra : This happend to me too when i was young not in the same way but it happend I was really curious about it and just like you wanted to find answears and fast untill one day my dad told me that... are you really ready for this?
Mollie : YES!
Alexandra : My dad, you, and I have the power to read people's minds.
Mollie : ........... Are you making fun of me?
Alexandra : No, am serious here look i'll prove it to you.
You are thinking about two girls called Jessica and Mia and how to avoid problems with them. True or false?
Mollie : Wait how'd you..... NO way it's true!?
Alexandra : Yes it is I'm really not making fun of you, we can read people's minds you still can't controll this power fully but if you really focus you can implement it any time!
Mollie : I CAN WHAT ?!!!
Alexandra : I know .... *gigles* That was the same reaction as mine listen I know this is too much for you to take on right now but believe me this power is really awesome.
Mollie : ............... Alright am .... going so sleep now and .... uh yea...
Alexandra : Dont worry you'll be fine.

===PAGE 2: END===​

 

I just thought someone would have to tell you that it's not "am", it's "I am" or shorter "I'm"

I like where this story is going tho, seems interesting

 

o god am gonna have to start fixing allot of mistakes if i want this story to even hit good
AM SO GLAD YOU LIKE IT <33 was afraid to post it ;-;
thank youuu

 

Solid 7/10

 

am really happy you love it <3
thanks alot

 

yay a generic plot

we have 2 girls who somehow gets superpowers


this is totally not becoming a cliche supernatural school manga
totally


7/10

 

-_- where are thse 2 girls of yours only mollie and her mother read well please

 

69/420!!!!! IGN RATING FAM!!!! BRING MOAR!!!!

 

k
2 females*

 

so what you want it to be all boring ? we need to spice it up a lil no ?

idk if this is a joke but i'll say thanks xD

 

what? when did i say it was boring?

 

you didnt but how do you want it to have anyprogress with out super powers or something interesting ?

 

Didn't even read it but i can rate it just by looking at the title "Pink Moon" <3 XD jk

but srsly didn't read it I'm 2 lazy <3

 

Smonk weed.

 

The grammar is ....


Never mind what a plot twist of her having to read the mind :3

 

7.8/10 too much water

 

................ :'(

--- Double Post Merged, Mar 11, 2017, Original Post Date: Mar 11, 2017 ---

again with grammar i keep failing :/ i need to improoved my english
ik it is

WOT ! xD

 

:3

 

Even tho i didnt read it cuz i am way too lazy
keep it up if u enjoy doing this

 

well i hope you can dedicate some time to read it and i suggest reading the first chapter first to get a better picture
thanks