»~Pink Moon~ ==Chapter : 2-Page 3== :Making it suspicious Pt.2

~~~Pink Moon~~~​

==Chapter 2: What was once unknown==

==Page 3: Making it suspicious Pt.2==​

Alexandra : Alright i'll leave you to it, Call me if you need anything.
Mollie: Okay, I can not thank you enough for your kindness.
Alexandra: Don't worry, If we don't help each other who else will help us.
As Alexandra said her last sentence she closed the door and went to help Her mother.
Mollie: Well, This definetely took an unexpected turn didn't it...
Okay, Think Mollie where could this mysterious orb be... I mean there is a chance that it could be anywhere...
Suddenly a mysterious voice spoke behind Mollie
Sun snuke up creeply : And ... It could be right beneath your nose!!
Mollie screamed : Ahh ... Don't creep up on me like that!!!
Alexandra: Huh? ...
Sun: Haha, It works on you too, So where are you now ?
Mollie: Failing? Yes, I can't even locate the orb it could be ANYWHERE ... I'm really confused.
Sun : Well, Your Mom didn't find it so hard.. Weirdly enough she realised the step Very fast, Though the steps before this one took her ages... You're lucky she skipped em for ya, I can't give you any hints as you have to find out everything by yourself..
I just came from a royal meeting .... Boring So i'll just follow you around, Invisible ofcaurse, Try to finish fast though your mother is getting really worried.
Mollie: What about Your mother?
Sun replied very mad: Just ... Finish this quest.
And so Sun disappeared in sparkles watching over Mollie again.
Mollie: I guess I'll hand out with Alex I might find a clue or two..
As Mollie approached the door of Her room she heard foot steps As if someone was listening to her and ran in the last seconds...
*Mollie: Ofcaurse, There had to be a twist to this didn't it .*
Mollie headed to the kitchen to help Alex and Sarah at whatever they were doing.
Mollie: Hey Mrs,Frost.. Do you need help in anything?
Sarah: No.. Not really Alex got everything down. Tell me more about yourself though while we are at it.
Mollie took a seat and told Sarah about a story she came up with to hide the fact that she is in a quest from the future.
Later, that night.
Seth: So, How was your day everyone?
Sarah: Not bad, Not bad at all It's been a normal day like anyother days except to the fact that we are joined with an angel that is Mollie and ofcaurse our dear Alex.
Alexandra: It's been a normal day too, Still taking hate from students because of the ''incident", Been studying quite a lot though.. We have a test tomorrow.
Mollie: Wait, What?!! We have a test coming? i barely opened my book i didn't know about it!
I guess i'm staying up all day...
Alexandra: Ops... I forgot to tell you, I'm so sorry for my ignorance.
Mollie: No, no It's alright i'm used to All nighters it'll be a piece of cake.
Seth: Who said cake?!!
Alexandra: Haha, Nice one dad!
It was a normal peacefull evening for Mollie and her new family, It seemed finally Normal for once...
Sarah: Good night everyone!
Seth: Good night warriors!!!
Sarah: Seth ...
Seth: Okay, Sorry Good night everyone!
Alexandra & Mollie : Good night!!
Later that night...
Mollie: Huh... Where i'm...
???: So you earned their trust eh? Very sneaky Mollie, What's your next step?
Ow; Don't tell me you really trust them now do You ? You think they will take a stranger just from the kindness of their heart ? pfsh You're too naive Mollie... You'll come back to me crawling knowing i was right....
Mollie !!
Mollie : *Gasp* What ? Who ? Where ? Why ?
Alexandra: Woah chill, Just me You were talking while sleeping we heard You from the other rooms... You must be very exhausted.. ALSO didn't you say you were doing an all nighter ?
*Cricket sound plays in background*
Mollie: End me .... I'm done for,
Alexandra: Hopefully it'll be an easy one...
Okay, Get ready to leave for school you're late.
Mollie: Ofcaurse I'm late ... Why wouldn't I be.
After a short while...
Alexandra: Hey Mollie you ready? We're too late!
Mollie: 5 minutes ...
Alexandra: Never mind.. She'll catch up.
As Mollie was heading outside she found out that Alex went without her but before she left Seth had to speak with her.
Seth: Mollie, You can wait.. Please come here I have something important I need to tell you.
Mollie: Mr. Frost?
Seth: Our time is short and there is way too much to say, Long story short, Alex heard you speaking with Sun yesterday about the Orb of advanced mind powers.
And she is very.. VERY not happy with that, Now look I know you are going under a trial and I know you are Alex's daughter. And I know about the sound in Your head.
When you leave this house this minute, This last second. You won't be back, Your trial is gonna either end up successfully or You'll fail that is something I can't tell.
Hopefully it'll be successful.
I want you to know that even if we had you for one day or one night, We're still happy that we were to meet You, Yes ... We never met in the future, I disapeared before i got to know You, But since i got to know You know, I know that Alex is very happy out there and I'm much more happier to know that you are my grand daughter. I hope we took good care of you for this night. Good bye Mollie...And Good Luck.
Mollie.. With a very sad look in her eyes the shadow covering a half of her She slowly approached Seth and hugged him.​

 

Sarah: Good bye Mollie, I'm glad i got to meet You.. Please take care of Alex.
Again Mollie hugged Sarah very hard.. And left without looking back with two simple words.
Mollie: Thank you....
As Mollie was walking down the street a familiar sound came from behind her.
So, This is where it ends...
The Person from behind Mollie help her hand and Teleported her into the scene where she came with Sun... The forest where They left AND arrived.​

Alexandra: Mollie, I wasn't mad because i tought you were back stabbing me. I was mad because i knew you won't stay anymore... I've been wishing to have a sister ... A friend to stay with me. A person that would undrestand me. It was You, reading your mind allowed me to know how close we were.. You have the same life like me in the future. People hate us for no reason... But we keep fighting.... We keep fighting untill our last breath but look the moment someone came to help me, it was just my Daughter, undergoing the same trial as I did.
This is it Mollie, I'm glad that i had met you..​

Alexandra pulled a weird necklace and wore it around her neck, after a short while a very powerfull wind is released and Alex was at her maximum powers...
Alexandra: Before we do this, I want you to know that I'm very proud to have met you at this age... and ofcaurse Good luck at this, prove to me that you are powerfull enough and You'll leave this trial Victorious.

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Dafuq happened 0.0

 

What do you mean it's all here ! xD

 

I like how you added the "Cricket sound plays in the background"

Made me laugh, honestly.

 

Sarcasm is to be used in every story so it's not boring .

 

Noice

 

expected a better reaction like
OMG OP CHAPTER
or something </3

 

waiting for the hate to roll in...
btw @2920131 nice story... even tho i lost track in 2nd or 3rd part xD

 

BUILD IT UP BUILD IT UP XD
nice one cant wait when the story really begins to shine
( dont worry even big anime series do long build ups )

 

Same ! free bumps coming up
Glad you love it you'd better read the ones you missed, Never chapter is gonna be lit.

OHOHOHO next chapter will hopefully be LIT

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I don't undrestand why are the views ratings so low compared to chapter 1 and it's pages ?
The views are EXTREMLY low for some reason ....

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60 views in about 4 days ...
WTF is going on i'm i missing the bigger picture here ?