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M8 post this story somewhere else, you'll get more recognition and more critics to help you improve it.

 

but where :/ ik i should but where :/ the only active forum i know is guildcraft where i have friends and stuff else .. idk :/

 

Maybe read some more novels or stories or some shit, you'll develop your story thinking skills as you go on, try to mix your own original ideas + creativity + ideas from other stories that you've read.

As you stand, this story is an average 4/10 at best (well most critics would say harsher things about this story)
And alot of people trashtalk you and your story.

I suggest you post this story in reddit or maybe 4chan, those 2 sites i know will get you some recognition.

 

4/10 .... but how am i even supposed to edit the story with new fresh ideas
also am barely active on forums like reddit or such
but i do agree people on gc keep trashtalking the story which is getting irritating

--- Double Post Merged, Apr 3, 2017, Original Post Date: Apr 3, 2017 ---

WOWOWOWO WAIT A SECOND 124 views in two days !!!!!
ok now THAT is a record for this story

 

lol true

 

god damn it @TeamTLV23 took you two days to see the post XD

 

What do i say...
NERD!

 

if you think my hobby makes me a nerd then you are more than welcome to not read it
thanks

--- Double Post Merged, Apr 3, 2017, Original Post Date: Apr 3, 2017 ---

148 freaking views in 2 days ... we bassically hit the goal
THANK YOU GUYS ! really ...
tomorrow releasing asap

--- Double Post Merged, Apr 4, 2017 ---

really sorry guys couldn't make the release today i'll try hard to get it tomorrow or the day after that
really sorry again