»~~Pink Moon~~ =Page 5: It's dangereous=

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  1. 2920131

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    ~~~~Pink Moon~~~~
    ======Page 5: It's dangerous=======

    Alexandra: Oh Mollie! you are awake how are you feeling sweetie

    Mollie: ...

    Alexandra *she hasn't said a word ever since the day she came crying it's been a week now!*

    Mollie, ever since the horrible things she heard from Jay, she haven’t said a single word to anyone and all that ever came out of her is silence.
    After Mollie woke, up she prepared herself for school and as the time for school and left with a very very slow and calm door close.
    Alex was really really worried about her and was ready to do anything so her daughter can smile again.
    As Mollie approached her class a common noise of people chatting was being heard but she couldn't care less and simply entered class and sat without even looking at class or saying a thing.


    Mr.K: Hello class, good morning!

    Class: Good morning Mr.K

    Mr.K: alright so where did we stop last time can someone remind me?

    John: we stopped at.... uhh breeding..

    Mr.k: Ow yes now I remember, Don't be shy it's the nature of humans and you must learn it. Okay let's keep progressing.

    Mr.k as always was asking allot of questions to make sure the class fully understands the things he is teaching them but as soon as he realized everyone was being energetic and active except for Mollie.

    Mr.K: Mollie can you come out i want to speak to you privately

    Mollie stood up again with no words and calmly walked outside the door.

    Jessica: hahaha that freak is finally in trouble!!

    Mr.K: What's wrong Mollie you've been so silent that's not how I remember you you've always been the most active student of mine .. Something bothering you? Don't be afraid I’ll help you get thought it.

    Mollie:....

    Mr.K had confirmed that something very strange is going on with Mollie but he can't force the problem out of Mollie's mouth

    Mr.K: alright then whatever it is you don’t want to share i respect that but i know you are strong enough to get through it so don't let me down I hate to see you like this.

    *Later in break time*

    Jessica: Girl I tell you I never been so happy that freak is finally not as joyful and annoying as she used to be ya know.... I feel like hearing 5 hours of Mr.K’s stupid lessons in this mood, I’ve never been better

    Mia: I have to agree with you, seeing her like this is priceless but enough of speaking about her, we are wasting break time. What are you planning for this weekend?

    Jessica: meeh you know random things here random things there as any other weekend nothing special, o look there she comes.

    Mia: ya know... As much as she looks horrible... I want to piss her off more!

    Jessica : Hey Mia just stop alright that's enough.

    Mia: shut up and watch this.

    As Mollie was coming from a way Mia was coming the other way around and as she came really close to Mollie she acted like Mollie came into her way and pushed her on purpose .
    Mollie fell on the ground as the hallway was already full of people everyone started laughing at Mollie little less they know what actually happened.
    Mollie was really silent, actually it was kind of scary especially in a moment like that but no one noticed and kept laughing, Mia started laughing the most and was obviously teasing Mollie…
    After few second of awkward and very creepy silence Mollie stood up very slowly.


    SUDDENLY! Mia was repelled so fast and crashed into a wall passing out right away!
    Mollie's eyes turned red as she was in a full rage mode she kept using a very weird power and kept hitting Mia into the same wall over and over and over again until she suddenly felt a weird pain in her chest.
    Mollie's eyes turned green again as it was obviously she calmed down ( at least a little) she came to considering what she just did and what just happened she took a wide look around her, and everyone seemed very scared trying themselves to know what even just happened.
    Mollie scared and very nervous ran crying outdoors not caring about anything anymore and went straight home.
    The moment she arrived home she decided that she just doesn't want to get her mom anymore troubles and just wanted to act as always until she realizes what happened


    Mollie: ....I....I'm home..

    Alexandra: Oh my god sweetheart I was so worried about you!

    Mollie: yea I’m really sorry for all that silence.

    But little less she knew, her tone was very weird actually it was weirder than ever and Alexandra obviously noticed that so she couldn't help but use her powers to know what's bothering Mollie once and for all!
    Alexandra gasped it was very obvious that she knows what Mollie didn't want her to know...

    Mollie: ahh... listen mom I’ve got something to tell you ...

    ============TO BE CONTINUED==============
    ==Page 5: END==
     
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  2. TeamTLV23

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    I like it.
     
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  4. camEEla_cabeYo

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    Prepare for the next re-enactment xDD
     
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  5. 2920131

    2920131 Forum Master Member

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    ,-, am done for
     
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  6. kuba1616

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    Hopefully Mia dies ._.

    Best chapter so far IMO
    Oh ye and idc bout ur grammar but fix it xD
     
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    2920131 Forum Master Member

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    Two awesome people said this is the best chapter so am really happy :D thanks
     
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    Wizare Ancient Poster Member

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    The story is good but I tried my best not to adapt that grammar "-"
     
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  9. 2920131

    2920131 Forum Master Member

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    Pffff and others tell me this chapter has no mistakes
    Jus try to read it don't tell me you don't understand a single word _-
    --- Double Post Merged, Mar 31, 2017, Original Post Date: Mar 30, 2017 ---
    69 views o_O now that's weird tbh
     
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  10. pebro13

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    I like where this is going, I love the ending :)
     
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    2920131 Forum Master Member

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    am glad you do
    best part is next chapter tomorrow :D
    --- Double Post Merged, Apr 1, 2017, Original Post Date: Mar 31, 2017 ---
    Sorry guys chapter six might come late today or tomorrow
    Very sorry for the delay
     
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  12. TheFapKing

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    OMG amazing this reminds me of the movie Chronicles. Anyways you should make her go fking insane and start killing people with her powers. :D
     
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  13. TheMinecraftProLord

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    I'm late and where's the fuk Is jay?
     
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  14. TheFapKing

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    Jay is sum asshole who dated molly for like 2 fking months. But he did it because of a fking bet and he finally decided to tell fking molly. He is such a cunt....
     
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    2920131 Forum Master Member

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    Broke up with her not sure if i will be able to implement him again tbh
    Also check chapter 6 it's great
     
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  16. KyocellHD

    KyocellHD Faithful Poster Member

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    ive missed out the chapter 3,4 becus of my inactivity.. so.. ill read all of them later and give u feed back :D
     
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